WHEN YOU’RE GONE…

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Walking in the world you came to me…

Perfect in all that you can be…

The glow in your eyes telling me

You cared for me

***

With each passing day

our friendship grew stronger

Chains surrounding, binding us together

Not for ill, but to keep us strong for each other

***

Day turns to night

and all I see…

… is you

***

The star light gleams off your pale skin

All hope and dreams of tomorrow surround us

They fill us with their golden song,

and silver words

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The days and nights continue on and on

Marching forward with a ceaseless pace

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One day it stopped

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All that was my life halted in its tracks

The moments of peace that I had

Dreams of tomorrow,

of tonight, and yesterday

***

All were shattered within my mind

You are gone,… not to be seen

Night after night I wait for you

hoping and praying

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Wanting you to come to me and smile

Wishing you would come home and say

“I miss you, my sweetypie”

***

As the days wore on, I knew it was true

I will not be able to see, the light in your eyes

The fire of love that kept us warm

will be forever cold

***

The angel inside your heart

is now shattered and gone for good

As I find you alone at home,

cold,.. ever so cold

***

The spirit within me… cries in anguish

As I kneel at your side, praying this isn’t true.

Here I am torn asunder,

how I will live.

***

Who can I love, when all that I was is now at my side?

Never will I be able to look to tomorrow..

Or hope for tonight’s stars,..

or dream of yesterday

***

Here I am torn apart over you….

Where can I go to find you?

19 Responses to “WHEN YOU’RE GONE…”

  1. Karl Says:

    beautiful poem :)

  2. jensen99 Says:

    The fire of love that kept us warm

    will be forever cold

    Duh…
    *menohok*

    Bagus puisinya…

  3. julie Says:

    ini lagu apa bukan sis?
    lam kenal yow

  4. Silly Says:

    @Karl:

    Thank you… :)

    @Jensen99:

    Menohok???… hehehe… Thanks anyway

    @Julie:

    Puisi cinnn… puisi about love lost :)

    (lagi iseng ajah )

  5. itikkecil Says:

    siapa yang pergi?
    *dipentung*

  6. dian Says:

    this is as beautiful as a song sand by jason mraz
    *jeritan hati karena gak bisa nonton java jazz*

    but nice poem indeed.

    • Silly Says:

      Thanks dian, sometimes when we feel that we gonna loose something, we suddenly have a bright idea to write a beautiful poem :)

  7. grubik Says:

    Gak perlu kemana-mana, i’m here, bibeh..
    Hihi…

  8. Suster Gila Says:

    ada yang pergi ada yang datang.
    **Bila ada, apa ya sama??

    • Silly Says:

      yup… someone’s gone… someone will come…
      still waiting for that moment :P

      But untill now, I still cannot get him out off my mind anyway :)

  9. moenk Says:

    wahhh.. knp baru skrg nemu *nemu?* blog yg asyik begini yah? salam kenal ya mbak… ;) pengen nglink, boleh tak? hehehe…
    penggemar baru :D

  10. polar Says:

    kayaknya prnh tau nih,he…

  11. Nasriza Nasir Says:

    hmm.. :D

  12. Jasont Says:

    What a beautiful poem. I can feel the pain of loosing here. Can I be the substitution for your lost?. I’m a very loving and faithful person my dear.

    So, may I be yours, my lady? ;)


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