In Belajar Bikin Puisi, Iseng, Poem, Psikology on February 21, 2009 at 9:34 am


Walking in the world you came to me…

Perfect in all that you can be…

The glow in your eyes telling me

You cared for me


With each passing day

our friendship grew stronger

Chains surrounding, binding us together

Not for ill, but to keep us strong for each other


Day turns to night

and all I see…

… is you


The star light gleams off your pale skin

All hope and dreams of tomorrow surround us

They fill us with their golden song,

and silver words


The days and nights continue on and on

Marching forward with a ceaseless pace


One day it stopped


All that was my life halted in its tracks

The moments of peace that I had

Dreams of tomorrow,

of tonight, and yesterday


All were shattered within my mind

You are gone,… not to be seen

Night after night I wait for you

hoping and praying


Wanting you to come to me and smile

Wishing you would come home and say

“I miss you, my sweetypie”


As the days wore on, I knew it was true

I will not be able to see, the light in your eyes

The fire of love that kept us warm

will be forever cold


The angel inside your heart

is now shattered and gone for good

As I find you alone at home,

cold,.. ever so cold


The spirit within me… cries in anguish

As I kneel at your side, praying this isn’t true.

Here I am torn asunder,

how I will live.


Who can I love, when all that I was is now at my side?

Never will I be able to look to tomorrow..

Or hope for tonight’s stars,..

or dream of yesterday


Here I am torn apart over you….

Where can I go to find you?

  1. beautiful poem 🙂

  2. The fire of love that kept us warm

    will be forever cold


    Bagus puisinya…

  3. ini lagu apa bukan sis?
    lam kenal yow

  4. @Karl:

    Thank you… 🙂


    Menohok???… hehehe… Thanks anyway


    Puisi cinnn… puisi about love lost 🙂

    (lagi iseng ajah )

  5. siapa yang pergi?

  6. this is as beautiful as a song sand by jason mraz
    *jeritan hati karena gak bisa nonton java jazz*

    but nice poem indeed.

    • Thanks dian, sometimes when we feel that we gonna loose something, we suddenly have a bright idea to write a beautiful poem 🙂

  7. Gak perlu kemana-mana, i’m here, bibeh..

  8. ada yang pergi ada yang datang.
    **Bila ada, apa ya sama??

    • yup… someone’s gone… someone will come…
      still waiting for that moment 😛

      But untill now, I still cannot get him out off my mind anyway 🙂

  9. wahhh.. knp baru skrg nemu *nemu?* blog yg asyik begini yah? salam kenal ya mbak… 😉 pengen nglink, boleh tak? hehehe…
    penggemar baru 😀

  10. kayaknya prnh tau nih,he…

  11. hmm.. 😀

  12. What a beautiful poem. I can feel the pain of loosing here. Can I be the substitution for your lost?. I’m a very loving and faithful person my dear.

    So, may I be yours, my lady? 😉

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